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Gravity will never be a friend to me
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the idea falling is hard to understand when you have wings but gravity keep pulling me down on to the unclean ground that men called earth .I trying to keep mycloud color wings in the air trying to reach my home sweet home.The firey but warm fireworks they called the sun is the only thing i can feel right now , not the wind that keep blowing me around like a piece paper blowing me left to right ,why am i trying so hard to reach home but not getting nowhere with my wings on my back , is it my soul trying to stay in my body because it only place it knows is in my body or is it my body sick and tired hearing my heart beating every second of a minute of everyday 24/7 ..... wait a minute what is this feeling that creeping up through my body is it happy , enjoy or giving up and feeling more human that i never felt before who knows?
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI really liked this conceptually. Its vague enough to evoke a wide range of ideas and emotions without choking them with a narrow vision or mindset and I liked that. Overall, it reminds me a lot of my experiences with "astral projection" and "lucid dreaming." Im guessing however that English is not your first language so I wont discredit you for poor wording though I definitely think its something you should work on and improve. With more writing experience I could definitely see your poetic mind being very intriguing as I notice you put a lot of thought into the abstract. Anyway, great job man. Keep it up, and if you want, id be happy to show you some of my writing? XD